Some Email Mistakes

Mistake

Here are a few email errors to make you smile!

~ A business friend wrote, “I enjoyed working with you and Mr. _____ on this project.” She forgot to enter our partner’s last name into the message.

~ A colleague recently asked me to ignore his previous email when his mass-communication included all his clients’ contact information. He simply entered their addresses into the “To” line instead of the “BCC” line to respect their privacy.

~ A client closed an email saying, “Hope you and your finance are doing well!” He meant to write “fiancĂ©” instead of “finance.” Or he could have intended to write “finances.”

~ I wrote “I’ll look the presentation over one final time to check for any tpyos” to a client. I misspelled “typo” accidentally. Thankfully, we laughed about it afterwards.

We all see many email gaffes — and are even guilty of quite a few! I certainly have made my share of mistakes. Have you made any email errors? How do you prevent from sending emails with mistakes?

Organizing Large Writing Projects like J.K. Rowling

J.K. Rowling's Organization

With large writing projects where there’s lots of information, organizing the details and dividing the topics can be more challenging than the actual writing. Whether you are crafting a report, white paper, manual or novel, you need to map out the information that you’ll include.

If the information is difficult to juggle, how can you begin organizing? What’s the best way to start?

When faced with a project that has multiple categories, sub-categories, themes and topics, all of which need to be distilled and grouped intuitively, there are several methods to first tackle organization.

I’m impressed by J.K. Rowling’s method for organizing chapters. This simple, hand-drawn chart breaks down chapters from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. The chapter’s month, title, central plot and sub-plots are all mapped out with this simple grid. This seems like a great way to organize information; it’s highly structured, easy to read and allows for layers of detail. J.K. Rowling must have used additional methods for organizing each specific chapter or plot line, but this grid is a great way to start.

For business writers, this method can be used to outline each topic of a report or letter, chapters of a manual or sections of a power point presentation or speech. This method could easily be transferred to an excel spreadsheet after being written out by hand. This way, you can collaborate with others, share your outline and make quick updates easily.

What’s your first step for organizing a large writing project? Have you ever used a method similar to J.K. Rowling’s? Do you have another method for mapping out detailed information?

When You’re the Office Proofreader

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Do your colleagues and employees’ rely on your writing and editing skills? Are you frequently asked to look over others’ writing or give projects a “quick look”?

Congratulations! Your co-workers obviously respect and admire your writing skills and keen eye for small errors. You should feel flattered. However, this can quickly become frustrating. When others ask for your help, it’s hard to refuse, despite having a full work load.

Poor writing skills in business can cause larger problems, too. If employees frequently sends out poor communications or produce documents peppered with errors, you clients, customers and competitors may believe that your business isn’t concerned with details. Worse, if your emails or proposals to clients are unclear, they may think that your business doesn’t fully value the relationship.

How can you improve communications skills at your office or business? Here are a few ideas:

  1. When a co-worker approaches you to edit some of their writing, offer to sit down with them and go through the document together. Your co-worker will appreciate the opportunity to learn your editing process.
  2. Create an “editing checklist” for your office or department. List errors that you see frequently, spelling and grammar mistakes. Include other questions for the writer to ask themselves, such as “Is the tone appropriate?” or “Will this make sense for someone with no prior knowledge of the topic?”
  3. Offer writing workshops – or webinars – for your department. Workshops will offer you and your co-workers the opportunity to assess writing skills, identify areas to improve and practice new techniques.
  4. Emphasize high-quality writing as vital for your business’ success. Ask your managers and executives to do the same.
  5. Hire professional writers and editors to craft and polish high-priority projects and communications. This investment will help improve your company’ reputation and even bring in more business.

Write like a Leader

While perusing Toastmaters International‘s website – an organization I admire – I read their article “The 10 Commandments of Communication: How to Speak like a Leader.”

Speaking and writing effectively have much in common – both require knowing your audience, the purpose of your speech, letter or article, and allowing your personal voice to shine. Writing poses several challenges that speaking doesn’t: when writing you have to engage readers more quickly, be more concise and convey your understanding of the audience creatively. Here are four tips to help you write like a leader:

1. Write to be understood. Just like with speaking, the purpose of your e-mail, article, brochure, booklet or report is that your reader will understand – and absorb – certain information. Take the time to organize and structure your writing. Use simple sentences and emphasize your central points.

2. Write for your readers’ benefit. Address your readers’ interests and concerns as openly as possible. Use “we” and “you” often, and “I” and “me” as infrequently as possible. You must do your research and know your audience to do this.

Use phrases like “From discussing your thoughts on ___” or “We’ve developed strategies to improve ___.”

3. Write authentically. When giving a speech, it’s much easier to tell jokes and show your human side. When writing, make sure you emphasize this part of you with concise jokes (but remember, sarcasm usually doesn’t read well), anecdotes or highly human language. An easy way to infuse e-mails with your human side is to add a short note about yourself and the reader outside of work, such as, “Jim and I had a great weekend at the beach. Have you and Sarah had time this summer to enjoy the beach? It must be hectic (but fun, of course!) with the new baby.”

Remember, nothing cultivates trust like authentic conversation.

4. “Listen” in writing. Your writing is only one side of the discussion – make sure your readers know that you understand their interests and concerns, and that you value their input. Instead of dictating information or listing what needs to be done, ask questions and invite them to share their perspective.

This is easier within e-mails, where you can ask questions freely, such as “We thought your performance on the last project was outstanding and would love to put your organizational skills to greater use. Is there a specific project or task you’d like to join?”

“Listening” in writing is more difficult in white papers, reports or brochures. Articulate your readers’ viewpoints and concerns that’s pertinent to your information. Only by beginning this way will readers feel that they can benefit from reading on. Conclude with a “call to action” for the reader to share their input – you’ll continue the conversation and learn valuable ideas.

5 writing errors that destroy credibility

“It has long been an axiom of mine that the little things are infinitely the most important.”
~Arthur Conan Doyle

Readers read some errors as just that – small mistakes. No one’s perfect, so misspellings or incorrect uses of prepositions and other small mistakes are easy for readers to move past and absorb your content’s message.

Other mistakes immediately make the reader question not only your writing abilities, but your credibility.

Good news? These errors are easy to spot when you are aware of them and proofread carefully.

Error #1: Using incorrect homonyms.
Their / There / They’re
Its / It’s
Your / You’re

Different homonyms completely change the meaning of the sentence. Spell-check won’t find these errors, so always double-check that they’re correct.

Error #2: Inconsistent titles.
This may seem obvious, but always stick to one method of naming or separating a document. For example, if your power point presentation is divided into six “chapters,” make sure they are all titled chapters. If one is accidentally named “module” or “part,” you’ll confuse your readers. Also, if one chapter is titled “Thriving in Our Economy,” use that exact title throughout the entire chapter.

Error #3: Mixing up words with similar meanings and spellings.
Affect / Effect
Farther / Further
Prospective / Perspective
Then / Than

These words are easy to confuse with one another and, like homonyms and contractions, spell-check won’t catch your mistake.

Error #4: Passive writing.
Active writing engages your readers and gives your authorial voice greater credibility. While some scientific and business projects require the passive voice, it’s best to minimize passive verbs to create more powerful writing.

Error #5: Redundancies.
Repeating a similar sentence or point doesn’t make it any clearer. Never repeat sentences or phrases with a brochure, website or e-book. When you organize content effectively and in a straight forward manner, there’s no need to repeat sentences.

The key to great business copy…

Is using the right words that will engage and persuade your readers.

Copy for business projects (such as e-mails, reports, white papers, etc.) can only be deemed successful if your readers actually read the copy and then walk away from the copy having learned something new or having been persuaded to do something new.

Study Successful Examples. Look at copy that succeeded within a similar business context. Look at e-mails that generated a high response or a brochure that your colleagues still talk about. Study them closely to determine why this copy works so well. Do the sentences tend to be shorter in length? Is the tone motivational, direct or conversational? You don’t have to reinvent the wheel when you study great past examples.

Listen Well. Before writing single a word of your copy, listen closely to your readers’ beliefs, desires and concerns. Listen to what your colleagues and supervisors want the copy to accomplish. Only by listening well – and strategically analyzing what you learn – will you be able to craft the perfect words, phrases and tone to achieve your goals.

Always Use the Active Voice. Great business copy should be action-orientated to engage and motivate your colleagues. As a rule of thumb, use the passive voice as infrequently as possible within your business writing projects, or avoid it all together.

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